(revised April 2001)
by Elizabeth St Jacques
The spring breeze melted snow on the hills then quickly disappeared.- U T'ak (1262-1342), author of this oldest surviving sijo.
I wish I could borrow it briefly to blow over my hair
And melt away the aging frost forming now about my ears.
Adaptation by Dr. Larry E. Gross, PhD.
wasn't so long ago that when one asked a Western poet if she or he wrote
sijo, the response was, Sijo? What's that? No longer. Today poets
around the warmly embrace this charming three-line poetry form that has
a long and distinguished history in Korea.
Sijo derives from the old Hyangka songs of the Sylla empire (668-936) and the prose songs of the Koryo kingdom (918-1392). However, it wasn't until the conclusion of the latter era that sijo came into its own.
Actually, there are three sijo forms - Chungsijo, Changsijo and Pyongsijo. As the first two forms have greater syllable counts and irregular line lengths, the shorter, more melodic Pyongsijo has been the preferred choice among Koreans. The Pyongsijo then - now identified simply as sijo - is the form to which North American poets are most acquainted.
was introduced to sijo in 1992, when guidelines for a couple of American
competitions arrived with an information sheet about the sijo; it provided
a brief history, explanation and two translations of classical Korean sijo
by Kim Unsong who is a sijo authority now living in California. Immediately,
captivated by the form, I boldly entered both sijo contests. To my
amazement, my attempts earned 2nd and 3rd places, and I was firmly hooked.
But how to learn more about sijo? No one I knew was familiar with - much
less writing -
to me, Kim Unsong felt my sijo were different. Then, in a May 2,
1994 letter to me, he made the following announcement: Classical Korean
Sijo, their elegance notwithstanding, need modernizing in imagery and delicacy,
This statement made me take a long, close look at the sijo by North American poets. It became clear to me that North America sijo in general differed from classical Korean sijo - in style, subject matter, expression, line lengths. Indeed, sijo in North America was definitely was being revolutionized. However, I was concerned: many poems didn't seem to be sijo at all.
To help introduce sijo and provide more understanding about the form, my articles began to appear in North America publications. But it wasn't until Dr. Larry Gross, PhD, of Florida, editor of HWUP! and TOP Poetry Newsletters, accepted a sijo article from me, that I learned he too was deeply interested in the form. In fact, he had introduced sijo to his readers in HWUP!, May 1992, as well as in his book, How To Write And Publish Poetry. Also, his 'adaptations' of English translated Korean sijo impressed me, as did his own sijo. Finally! - a North American poet whose devotion to sijo equaled Kim Unsong's and my own.
should be mentioned that as of 1971, articles and/or books by In-Sob Zong,
Richard Rutt, Peter H. Lee, Jahiun Joyce Kim, Kim Unsong and other authors
strove to introduce North Americans to classical Korean sijo. But
as with other foreign poetry forms - such as Japanese haiku - it has taken
Therefore, because Larry Gross and I knew of no other North American poets consistently writing original sijo, and because most poems we had read seemed to have missed the important elements of the form, we felt a need to establish guidelines. Working through our own differences of opinion then, the following guidelines (somewhat different from those of Korea's sijo, but which maintain primary characteristics) were established:
sijo is a 3-line poem consisting of between 44 to 46 syllables. Each line
has 14 to 15 syllables. Line 1 presents a problem or theme, line 2 develops
or 'turns' the thought, and line 3 resolves the problem or concludes the
theme. The first half of the final line employs a 'twist' by means of a
surprise in meaning, sound, tone or other device. To end with originality
of wit, a profound
The sijo has a pleasing musical quality woven intricately throughout that is most important because even today, favorite sijo are sometimes sung or chanted. While imagery (metaphor, simile, pun, etc.) is employed in many sijo, it is not mandatory.
the West, the sijo often appears as a six-line poem – that is, each of
the three lines is broken in half, with each couplet separated by a blank
line to emphasize distinctiveness. Presenting it this way facilitates printing.
However, some poets believe that by splitting lines, the uniqueness of
You will notice that Kim Unsong uses end rhymes; he does so in all his translations as well as in his collection of original sijo, Modern Sijo. End rhyme is an experimental technique aimed at pleasing Western readers. However, as this tends to pour the Sijo into the same mold as NorthSNOW FLOWERS
American and European poetry, I feel end rhymes infringe on the uniqueness of the form. That is not to say I'm against end rhyme in sijo. On occasion I use it in my own work, finding that a poem sometimes demands end rhyme. But two rhyming lines per poem seem quite enough. To my ear, more than that becomes tiresome. Internal rhyme, on the other hand, seems perfectly natural for sijo. But it too should be used sparingly.
While Korean sijo do not often have titles, Unsong consistently uses them. Most of my earlier work has them as well while much of my most recent sijo do not. Larry Gross prefers no titles, feeling a title diminish(es) the essential surprise & thus defeats the purpose of the final line. In my opinion, a title sometimes enhances the poem's mystery, arouses curiosity, and draws the reader into the poem. But this can only be achieved when a title does not repeat from the poem or give away the finale's surprise. Sometimes a title can even set the stage, providing information when space does not permit in so brief a poem. Inasmuch as I believed the use of titles were a Western experiment, it was surprising to find titles with all sijo in Modern Korean Verse In Sijo Form (1997), an anthology selected and translated by the well-known and higly respected Korean sijo authority, Jaihiun Kim. It's obvious then that views concerning the form are undergoing changes via Korea's modern poets.
poets are free to make choices, they should not lose sight of three characteristics
that make sijo unique: basic structure, musical/rhythmic elements, and
the 'twist'. As more poets become involved with sijo, these guidelines
will surely undergo further modifications. In the meantime, may I
also respectfully point out that because North American landscapes, lifestyles,
peoples, customs and values differ from that of Korea, it shouldn't be
too surprising if our sijo prove to be different. Hopefully, our Korean
friends will not regard this as an insult, but will agree that we can no
matter how the North American vision might alter sijo in English, it is
hoped we honor its place of origin and basic concept, and consider it an
instrument of international communication and good will. As an important
historical contribution to the world of poetry, sijo has the power to
interest in the form is quickly growing. Several print publications publish
sijo, including Larry Gross' SIJO WEST (the first North American publication
devoted entirely to English-language sijo), LYNX, and others. A sijo category
is now included in the annual poetry competitions of the
Internet has opened even more doors to sijo. In 1997 my website, SIJO BLOSSOMS,
came into being, followed by Larry Gross’ SIJO WEST online. Later, both
sites moved to their present locations, changed their home page titles
(respectively) to POETRY IN THE LIGHT and THE WORDSHOP, and now house a
variety of Asian poetry forms. Later still, Larry Gross hosted an online
sijo forum through the World Haiku Club that continues to attract
it has taken time for Western poets to become truly interested in and enthused
about sijo, the quality work that today's poets are producing has made
the wait well worth it. Continued success to all!
so many changes have I seen in all the passing years
NOTE TO THE UNIVERSE
slightly different version of this article appeared in POEMATA, Vol. 13:2,
1997. Sections of this article first appeared in HWUP Poetry Newsletter,
issue #21, 1993 under the title, CLASSICAL KOREAN SIJO. Other sections
in this article are taken from my book, Around The Tree Of Light. Additional
points and updated information were added to this article April 2001. (For
an indepth study of sijo characteristics, see INTRODUCTION
Kim Unsong's Korean sijo translation and quote from his letter to me (May 24, 1994) as well as Dr. Larry Gross' adaptation of U’Tak’s sijo are included with permission.
Modern Sijo by Kim Unsong, $14.00 ppd in US funds; PO Box 1131, San Bruno, CA, USA 94066.
Around The Tree Of Light by Elizabeth St Jacques. Revised edition, 1997. $14.00 ppd; maplebud press, 406 Elizabeth Street, Sault Ste. Marie, ON Canada P6B 3H4
Modern Korean Verse In Sijo Form, (1997) an anthology selected and translated by Jaihiun Kim, edited by Ronald B. Hatch. $16.95; Ronsdale Press, 3350 West 21st Avenue, Vancouver, BC, Canada V6S 1G7
How To Write & Publish Poetry by Dr. Larry Gross, PhD. $22. in US funds; POB 13743, Tallahassee, FL, USA 32317-3743.
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